Hi been a massive orbital fan for ages and have been working on a few songs of my own too so thought it might be a good idea to post a few and see what people thought.
So here is one attached called Innocent driver, please see what you think !!!
P.s hope i posted this in the right place
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAWheaeqoP0
Some feedback appreciated : )
Moderators: Loopz, usernick, legspin, jof, the PLA
- davemacfrombath
- The Moebius
- Posts: 1376
- Joined: Wed Mar 02, 2005 4:03 pm
- Question: Orbital
- Location: In Clarkson's cellar with a blowtorch and pliers
Re: Some feedback appreciated : )
I like the melody and the general structure of the tune.
You might want to consider doing something with the drums though - some sort of build up?
You might want to consider doing something with the drums though - some sort of build up?
Slugs! HE created slugs! They can't hear. They can't speak. They can't operate machinery. Are we not in the hands of a lunatic?
-
- Newbie
- Posts: 4
- Joined: Wed Apr 20, 2011 12:19 pm
- antispam: No
- Question: Orbital
- Anti Spam: Orbital
Re: Some feedback appreciated : )
Dave thanks for the reply. I like to keep the drums minimal in most of my tunes but thanks for the feedback.
Last edited by baron42 on Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:15 pm, edited 1 time in total.
-
- Newbie
- Posts: 4
- Joined: Wed Apr 20, 2011 12:19 pm
- antispam: No
- Question: Orbital
- Anti Spam: Orbital
Re: Some feedback appreciated : )
Ok another one to listen too . It's called Dirty justice !!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1mRH-P7F08
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1mRH-P7F08
-
- Newbie
- Posts: 10
- Joined: Wed Jul 06, 2011 8:41 pm
- antispam: No
- Question: Orbital
- Anti Spam: Orbital
- Location: Sweden
- Contact:
Re: Some feedback appreciated : )
I also think that it would be nice with some feedback on my music.
It is available at:
http://www.myspace.com/non73audio and
http://soundcloud.com/no73 for download
I think baron42 has done a really good job!
It is available at:
http://www.myspace.com/non73audio and
http://soundcloud.com/no73 for download
I think baron42 has done a really good job!