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Hi been a massive orbital fan for ages and have been working on a few songs of my own too so thought it might be a good idea to post a few and see what people thought.

So here is one attached called Innocent driver, please see what you think !!!

P.s hope i posted this in the right place :D


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAWheaeqoP0
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I like the melody and the general structure of the tune.

You might want to consider doing something with the drums though - some sort of build up?
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Dave thanks for the reply. I like to keep the drums minimal in most of my tunes but thanks for the feedback.
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Ok another one to listen too . It's called Dirty justice !!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1mRH-P7F08
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I also think that it would be nice with some feedback on my music.

It is available at:
http://www.myspace.com/non73audio and
http://soundcloud.com/no73 for download

I think baron42 has done a really good job!
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